The rat woke up with a feeling That all was not right with the world An unease sensed deep in his body An aversion that slowly uncurled A displacement from his surroundings Hints of deja-vu in reverse A knowing that staying this path Would lead to something worse He tried to explain his sensations To the rats in charge of the pack Something is wrong, he told them The edges are fading to black We’re losing what can’t be returned Once lost it may never come back They scoffed at the rats baseless worries We have food aplenty We are all living like kings We have all we need in abundance There’s no reason we should change a thing Yet the feeling within persisted Gnawing and tugging away Try as he might to resist it The rat knew this was not the way More rats every day were dying Some went slowly to death and some quick Still most in the pack refused to look At the thing that was making them sick When the rat could watch no longer He left the colony alone Found shade beneath an ancient tree Here he set up home Far from the race run by peer and elder Close to a source that was fresh and clean Soon others began to join him At first a trickle and then a stream They felt the same pull that he did Though none could put it into thought Accepting the truth of this wisdom Innate, but never spoken or taught The rats grew ears to hear the silence Their eyes turned to what is not seen More questions abounded than answers Soft sighs from the space in between The wrongness they felt had receded Depths of knowing replacing their doubt The rat fell asleep with a sense of fulfilment The pack content from the inside out

My daughter saw two enormous rats on a path the other day and said, ‘look Mummy, they’re adorable.’ And so they were, I’m grateful to her for noticing.
“soft sighs from the space in between “ What a lovely picture you paint with your words. Rats get bad press for many reasons, but you have to admire their resilience. Not sure I’d want them in my home but in their natural environment they’re awesome.
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Thanks lovely, those kind of lines are the ones that come from the ether ☺️
I won’t tell you where we saw these ones but they weren’t at home so feel free to visit 😘
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What a great wisdom story Rae
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Thanks Paul, glad you enjoyed it 😊
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My pleasure 🙂
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